UzumakiNaruto9999

Thanks for your story as promised I got back to you after reading it. It was really interesting short masterpiece with exceptionally clear message. Although I only felt ending was a little forced or rushed but I guess it was intended to be a short story. Thanks. 
          If you write any new works, I will be looking forward to read them too.

ColtanWinkler

@HypnoSwirl Hi!
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HypnoSwirl

@UzumakiNaruto9999 I agree about the ending. It was both rushed and forced. Basically I re-wrote my original story, adding depth and detail. The original story went seven parts and I wanted to keep it the same.
            
            I appreciate your reading, votes and analysis. Thanks a million. ❤️❤️
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