I-Am-Over-It

Okay. To clear up any confusion Enterig Unknown Worlds is a story about he unusual life of a NB person named Kai. This is NOT the story I was talking abt before. I’m trying to make an outline for it so it might be awhile before I can post anything. The name of that story will be ‘The Judge’. Okay hopefully I’ll see you guys soon

I-Am-Over-It

I decided to change the MC for this story, so instead of Kai their name will be Dominique, Dom for short
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I-Am-Over-It

Okay. To clear up any confusion Enterig Unknown Worlds is a story about he unusual life of a NB person named Kai. This is NOT the story I was talking abt before. I’m trying to make an outline for it so it might be awhile before I can post anything. The name of that story will be ‘The Judge’. Okay hopefully I’ll see you guys soon

I-Am-Over-It

I decided to change the MC for this story, so instead of Kai their name will be Dominique, Dom for short
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I-Am-Over-It

this message may be offensive 
Entering*
            
            I can’t fucking spell
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OK so I have this idea and I think its a good idea but I don't know for sure, here's the idea; in some fantasy world if a person (The Judge) looks into someone's eyes without feeling guilt she can see everything that person has ever seen, done, thought abt, etc., but everytime she does this she loses 5% of her lifespan. It doesn't seem like much but the little things add up as she learns at the expense of 45% of her life. 
          
          
          What do you guys think? Is it good? Should I write it? Should I co-write it with some of my friends or with one of you guys? What should I do?

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Cool thanks
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hamaddiction

@I-Am-Over-It I like Blake
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Okay, I got my shit together somewhat! Anyway, What should the MC's name be? I was thinking something that's generally considered a masculine name. Something like Blake or Kai. Idk though...…
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