UJI_SARANG

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A/n: I'm sorry if the chapter *fight*& *suck* was too toxic and abusive please forgive my corrupted mind, I'm just a 15 year old gal who writes smut and I make a lot of typos and all 
          T - T I'm really sorry 
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          Hinata
          
          He gave me a look and ask
          
          "Are you really sick?" 
          
          I feel my heart ache in instant and my eyes started to go blurry because of the tears forming in my eyes
          
          What does that mean? Does he think I am faking this shitty fever? I bit my lip in annoyance while half of my emotions we're restrained
          
          "So you think I am doing this on purpose?"I ask disbelief tone linger on my voice 
          
          I clench my fist 
          
          Kageyama just raise his brow and shrug his shoulders off
          
          "Why not? Maybe you ARE just pretending to be sick" he spat and I can feel my eyes moistened and soon a tear broke through
          
          a tear slip through my eyes sliding down my cheeks
          
          "Pretending?" I mutter and wipe my eyes still looking at him in pain
          
          He doesn't speak and just look at me, He don't believe me at all 
          
          I clench my fist and bring my forearm above my eyes blocking the sight of my eyes
          
          I am not crying
          
          Tch let him think what he wanted to think I don't fucking care.
          
          "GET OUT" my voice sounds commanding and bold, I know that I totally sound rude right now but I don't give a shit

I-didnotjustreadthat

@UJI_SARANG  Well The Story was Wonderful! I like how you  made it lend in to the kiss like the kiss was Important! 
            I really don't know how to explain it ;-; 
            But yeah Great Story :)
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I-didnotjustreadthat

@UJI_SARANG  Wow! I loved it! There were like 3 Typos but after that every thing seems fine. Sadly I could relate to Hinata about the Pill. ;-;
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UJI_SARANG

            I gulp down the water but the medicine is so stubborn to the point it doesn't even want to go with the flow 
            
            I gulp another mouthful of water and kageyama gave me puzzled look,my cheeks puff up of water
            
            I gulp it down and I can still feel the bitter taste while the solid shape remain inside my mout
            
            I grimace and duck downward to spit the tablet in my hand but kageyamas fingertips tap my chin pushing it upwards for me to meet his 'you are dead if u spit that' look
            
            I made a sound down my throat in protest
            
            "can't swallow?" He ask and I nod still looking up, I can feel my cheeks heating up at the distance of our faces
            
            It's inches apart 
            
            I could feel his hot breath fanning my cheek ,a faint smell of mint reach my nose
            
            "you wanna get better soon?" He ask again and I nod again in response
            
            "you're gonna swallow that Medicine" I nod 
            
            "even if it taste bitter?" His voice dripping to sound so sensual in my ears but I found myself nodding
            
            And right there 
            
            In that spot
            
            With his fingertips holding my chin into place
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UJI_SARANG

HEY HEY HEYYYYY just wanna say your comments made my day :> omfg even though that book is really crappy and lame .Ily

I-didnotjustreadthat

@UJI_SARANG  Sure ! I will try to be brutally honest. If I can :<
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UJI_SARANG

@UJI_SARANG don't worry! I'll just send you the next chapter I've been making and you can be brutally honest with me so I can realize what am I missing,I really think I should add smut but it turns out sweet I don't know .Please help me :< I really think that something's missing huehuehue
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I-didnotjustreadthat

@UJI_SARANG  What If I don't any Brain cells or ideas to write something ;-;
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