IAMGOD44

Damn those last episodes of hazbin hotel showed nothing but Alastor being a fraud I can't believe the show hyped him up as some kind of big bad when he was nothing but a puppet for Rosie and I don't get it if Rosie says he's the most powerful sinner than wouldn't that make him stronger than her which wouldn't make any sense because he's getting his power from her yo this show got too many plot holes. Because this man Alastor was introduced taking down some of the most powerful sinners in hell and yet all of the vees jumped him and were able to somehow put pressure on him when the show states that he is the most powerful out of them all nah the power scaling is completely f***** in this show. And can the creator of the show have Charlie do something instead of sprouting her horns threateningly and ending up not doing anything in the long run she does it twice in the show and it serves no purpose I need Charlie to tee up and show why she's the princess of hell and stop being a little wuss and stop letting Alastor feel like he's the one in charge.

Reaperwolf482

@IAMGOD44 Hey I like how it's Rosie who owns alastor's soul and she is a good character
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TheNuut

@IAMGOD44 word of advice buddy, if you wanna watch hazbin or helluva boss, just turn your brain off, it helps
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dtagonlord

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@IAMGOD44 to be fair it's clear to me from helluva boss the creator has no clue how to wright a story and is more focus on well the musical side and not the story and i am pretty sure everyone thought it be lilith who owns alastor's soul and i mean charlie is on the poster heck even the middle i think but she does jack shit i think i could do more then her hell the mini psycho (niffty) has done more and why did rosie say alastor is the most powerful if now the reason is that it was secretly rosie why would she say that?
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Fufafufufufa

Yo wsg G, I wanted to let you know on this idea I had for your spider-man story that you  could add
          
          
          Alr so hear me out, in All spiderman in DC stories the JOKER, is never written as a good character. He is either a fodder villain, dies immediately, never used or is just portrayed garbagley
          
          Now hear me out on my idea: what if in your versionz the joker becomes more and more I tried and obsessed with spider-man. Maybe it's because his old comedian life likes the jokes spiderman tells and the brutality of the symbiote, or maybe it's just because spider-man is both a night and day hero, cramming more time into stopping the joker than let's say it taking 2 or 3 nights for batman.
          
          Either way, the joker starts to make him his main opp. Like that one scene in the vampire batman movie from 2004, where Joker goes "batsy, you complete me". I'm seeing potential for spider-man to have Joker be his new main nemesis
          
          Now I'm not saying have Joker love spider-man like that. I'm saying have him obsessed with spiderman the same way the Green Goblin is, with a lil mix of jokers personality.
          
          
          What do you think? And I spitting?

IAMGOD44

@Fufafufufufa you know you might be cooking my g I ain't going to lie to you
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Ophuliaj

Yo uh can I have some advice and tips because I'm planning out a female Ben 10 x male reader storybut I don't want it to be having an Omnitrix or any variant of the Omnitrix I want the user to be actually a guardian of the Omnitrix like a full on child sent to earth with the Omnitrix besides the pod of him sleeping

Spectrum234

I saw that Alien Walker isn't showing on your profile and says it's been deleted when I go to it, Did you go to your drafts? I don't know if Wattpad has the ability to unpublish stories but it's worth a look if you didn't already 

AlsoAstitva

Saw that you removed the alien walker book, not that I worried cause the trend was getting old so here is an idea or challenge depending on how you take it, how about a betrayed ultimate Malereader x invincible fanfic
          
          Let me know, what you think ;)

Verytiredmarine

@AlsoAstitva yeah it's not there my dude
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IAMGOD44

@AlsoAstitva Huh what? That's strange I don't see it either 
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AlsoAstitva

@IAMGOD44 cause it ain't showing, all I see are 4 published book and alien walker ain't one of them 
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IAMGOD44

Damn those last episodes of hazbin hotel showed nothing but Alastor being a fraud I can't believe the show hyped him up as some kind of big bad when he was nothing but a puppet for Rosie and I don't get it if Rosie says he's the most powerful sinner than wouldn't that make him stronger than her which wouldn't make any sense because he's getting his power from her yo this show got too many plot holes. Because this man Alastor was introduced taking down some of the most powerful sinners in hell and yet all of the vees jumped him and were able to somehow put pressure on him when the show states that he is the most powerful out of them all nah the power scaling is completely f***** in this show. And can the creator of the show have Charlie do something instead of sprouting her horns threateningly and ending up not doing anything in the long run she does it twice in the show and it serves no purpose I need Charlie to tee up and show why she's the princess of hell and stop being a little wuss and stop letting Alastor feel like he's the one in charge.

Reaperwolf482

@IAMGOD44 Hey I like how it's Rosie who owns alastor's soul and she is a good character
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TheNuut

@IAMGOD44 word of advice buddy, if you wanna watch hazbin or helluva boss, just turn your brain off, it helps
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dtagonlord

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@IAMGOD44 to be fair it's clear to me from helluva boss the creator has no clue how to wright a story and is more focus on well the musical side and not the story and i am pretty sure everyone thought it be lilith who owns alastor's soul and i mean charlie is on the poster heck even the middle i think but she does jack shit i think i could do more then her hell the mini psycho (niffty) has done more and why did rosie say alastor is the most powerful if now the reason is that it was secretly rosie why would she say that?
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IAMGOD44

I hear hazbin hotel is coming back do y'all want me to do a story on it?

dtagonlord

@IAMGOD44 i just realized i don't think there is a The Flintstones story on this site?
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Fufafufufufa

Wait why did the new story get deleted

ELMatthew47

@IAMGOD44 It does sounds like the same thing as Something Spectacular book, but if it’s something, in my opinion, it’s not worth the make a story if it might be similar with different outcomes. Probably best to stick with Spectacular Book, there’s also the fact that his Background origin is still unknown, whether it is just like Peter Parker or different origin
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Fufafufufufa

@IAMGOD44 y'know what that's actually a good reasonn
            I was hyped by a new spiderman book by you but if it helps the already goated one then that's just blessed. Can't wait for more
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IAMGOD44

@Fufafufufufa I just decided to do everything I was going to do in that book in the something spectacular book a couple people pointed out that what I was doing could be considered Overkill and would make the story boring if I had Spider-Man Be an expertly trained assassin. So I just decided to grab the whole spin-off book thing and focus on the something spectacular book 
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