IAMROMME

UPDATE
          	
          	
          	RATINGS AND HONEST REVIEWS OF SOME OF MY STORIES( as a writer and if I were a reader edition✨) PART 1
          	
          	
          	STORY: DREAM AND REALITY
          	
          	Rating as a WRITER: 5/10
          	Honest review: Cringe. Sa una lang maganda or sa una lang siya catchy. Sinapian ata ako ng sampung demonyo that time na sinusulat ko 'to kasi nang binasa ko na pati ako na shook sa content ng story ko bhie. Minadali masyado. Walang emphasis yung ibang mga importanteng details. Some of the chapters are just too plain or boring. The grammar is not grammaring minsan pero kere na rin kasi way back pandemic pa 'to and bata pa ako nito so hindi pa masyadong malawak ang vocabulary ko. But at some point, I can see its potential. Maybe revision lang talaga yung need na gawin to save this story.
          	
          	If I were a READER: 5/10
          	Honest review: If hindi 100 percent ang kainosentihan mo magugulat ka talaga sa simula ng story na 'to. Maganda naman pero kulang. Parang minadali nga talaga kasi masyadong naipaliwanag ang ibang scene. Parang halfway ng whole story mawawalan ka na ng gana kasi hindi na siya consistent or ang flow ng pagdeliver ng story is parang nag iba. But the thought or the concept was good. Maybe a little more creativity and elaboration of some of the events para maging catchy rin siya just like the other chaps.

IAMROMME

PART 3 ✨
          	  
          	  
          	  
          	  STORY: MAKE ME FALL
          	  
          	  Rating as a WRITER: 9/10
          	  Honest review: So good! One of my stories that I am so proud of. Adik ako sa ganitong type na story and for me to be able to write one was really a milestone. Yung grammar at pag build ng sentences is maayos na rin kumpara sa other stories ko. Ang ganda ng pagkakagawa sa mga characters. The scenes are just too cute. Tapos yung maganda kasi nabibigyan ko na ng hustisya yung mga important scenes. Pero syempre it's not perfect. May flaws pa rin pero I can see how much I've grown over this past few years because of this story. I know some people don't like to read BL stories, so this story isn't for everyone, but I don't care HAHAHA. My story, my rule. Anyways, it has a lot of potential. Maybe kaunting push pa to make it more better. 
          	  
          	  If I were a READER: 9/10
          	  Honest review: It's a nice story. The concept, the flow, the characters and the emotions. Not everyone is fond of Bl stories, but I am! Emeeee. If may flaws yung story na 'to... maybe yung mga grammatical errors at some boring scene. But so far, I can say that this story deserves attention. It's a good one, well if you like BL stories.
          	  
          	  
          	  
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          	  That's all for tonight, y'all. Sa susunod naman yung iba. If gusto niyo rin magbigay ng ratings and honest review, feel free na mag comment. Mas mabuti na rin na magka idea ako about sa perspectives niyo. Goodnight everyone
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IAMROMME

PART 2 ✨
          	  
          	  
          	  STORY: THE TEN MILLION BID Volume 1
          	  
          	  Rating as a WRITER: 7/10
          	  Honest review: Maganda pero may flaws. Hindi ko lubos naisip na masyadong bata ang edad na inilagay ko sa character ni Rin(or also known as Shun). Lalo na at may mga scene na kailangan niyang maging 'intimate' kay Phoenix. It's actually an honest mistake. Nagkamali ako na ganoong edad ang inilagay ko. It's one of the flaws. Kasi maganda na yung concept eh, kaso nasira dahil lang sa edad niya. It makes the story complicated kasi parang naging pedophile bigla. Some people doesn't want to read stories like that pa naman so mali talaga na move yung ginawa ko and I know that. Some scene didn't get justifications rin. Parang hindi na explain ng maayos kaya nagiging confuse ang mga readers.  Ang cringe rin ng mga grammar ko rito, ang daming errors. And I know na may mga cringe scenes din HAHAHA.
          	  
          	  If I were a READER: 8/10
          	  Honest review: Nagagandahan ako sa story na 'to kasi gusto ko talagang makabasa ng mga ganitong stories. Nakakakilig! The way the characters were created is just so good. But yes napansin ko rin yung edad ni Rin. It's just so young, omg. Tapos nakakaloka pa kasi ang haharot na nila ni Phoenix that time kahit gano'n pa lang ang edad. If you imagine, it feel so wronggg. Some of the important details lacks emphasis, too. Pero nabigyan naman ng hustisya ang story na 'to.
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IAMROMME

UPDATE
          
          
          RATINGS AND HONEST REVIEWS OF SOME OF MY STORIES( as a writer and if I were a reader edition✨) PART 1
          
          
          STORY: DREAM AND REALITY
          
          Rating as a WRITER: 5/10
          Honest review: Cringe. Sa una lang maganda or sa una lang siya catchy. Sinapian ata ako ng sampung demonyo that time na sinusulat ko 'to kasi nang binasa ko na pati ako na shook sa content ng story ko bhie. Minadali masyado. Walang emphasis yung ibang mga importanteng details. Some of the chapters are just too plain or boring. The grammar is not grammaring minsan pero kere na rin kasi way back pandemic pa 'to and bata pa ako nito so hindi pa masyadong malawak ang vocabulary ko. But at some point, I can see its potential. Maybe revision lang talaga yung need na gawin to save this story.
          
          If I were a READER: 5/10
          Honest review: If hindi 100 percent ang kainosentihan mo magugulat ka talaga sa simula ng story na 'to. Maganda naman pero kulang. Parang minadali nga talaga kasi masyadong naipaliwanag ang ibang scene. Parang halfway ng whole story mawawalan ka na ng gana kasi hindi na siya consistent or ang flow ng pagdeliver ng story is parang nag iba. But the thought or the concept was good. Maybe a little more creativity and elaboration of some of the events para maging catchy rin siya just like the other chaps.

IAMROMME

PART 3 ✨
            
            
            
            STORY: MAKE ME FALL
            
            Rating as a WRITER: 9/10
            Honest review: So good! One of my stories that I am so proud of. Adik ako sa ganitong type na story and for me to be able to write one was really a milestone. Yung grammar at pag build ng sentences is maayos na rin kumpara sa other stories ko. Ang ganda ng pagkakagawa sa mga characters. The scenes are just too cute. Tapos yung maganda kasi nabibigyan ko na ng hustisya yung mga important scenes. Pero syempre it's not perfect. May flaws pa rin pero I can see how much I've grown over this past few years because of this story. I know some people don't like to read BL stories, so this story isn't for everyone, but I don't care HAHAHA. My story, my rule. Anyways, it has a lot of potential. Maybe kaunting push pa to make it more better. 
            
            If I were a READER: 9/10
            Honest review: It's a nice story. The concept, the flow, the characters and the emotions. Not everyone is fond of Bl stories, but I am! Emeeee. If may flaws yung story na 'to... maybe yung mga grammatical errors at some boring scene. But so far, I can say that this story deserves attention. It's a good one, well if you like BL stories.
            
            
            
            ****
            
            That's all for tonight, y'all. Sa susunod naman yung iba. If gusto niyo rin magbigay ng ratings and honest review, feel free na mag comment. Mas mabuti na rin na magka idea ako about sa perspectives niyo. Goodnight everyone
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IAMROMME

PART 2 ✨
            
            
            STORY: THE TEN MILLION BID Volume 1
            
            Rating as a WRITER: 7/10
            Honest review: Maganda pero may flaws. Hindi ko lubos naisip na masyadong bata ang edad na inilagay ko sa character ni Rin(or also known as Shun). Lalo na at may mga scene na kailangan niyang maging 'intimate' kay Phoenix. It's actually an honest mistake. Nagkamali ako na ganoong edad ang inilagay ko. It's one of the flaws. Kasi maganda na yung concept eh, kaso nasira dahil lang sa edad niya. It makes the story complicated kasi parang naging pedophile bigla. Some people doesn't want to read stories like that pa naman so mali talaga na move yung ginawa ko and I know that. Some scene didn't get justifications rin. Parang hindi na explain ng maayos kaya nagiging confuse ang mga readers.  Ang cringe rin ng mga grammar ko rito, ang daming errors. And I know na may mga cringe scenes din HAHAHA.
            
            If I were a READER: 8/10
            Honest review: Nagagandahan ako sa story na 'to kasi gusto ko talagang makabasa ng mga ganitong stories. Nakakakilig! The way the characters were created is just so good. But yes napansin ko rin yung edad ni Rin. It's just so young, omg. Tapos nakakaloka pa kasi ang haharot na nila ni Phoenix that time kahit gano'n pa lang ang edad. If you imagine, it feel so wronggg. Some of the important details lacks emphasis, too. Pero nabigyan naman ng hustisya ang story na 'to.
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