IAm3amSnacc

I'm officially half way to 40 years old 
          	
          	How we feelin

IAm3amSnacc

First time posting one o these so
          
          How you guys liking my smut story? Feedback on it? Constructive criticism?

IAm3amSnacc

@DoodleDragon215 I agree with that last part. I've yet to see someone who writes a slow paced story. No offense to anyone out there, but in real life, they wouldn't go that fast (especially on their first time-)
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DoodleDragon215

It is very well written! The pacing and emotions are perfect. It does not feel too rushed, and I appreciate that. Timing is a vital part in any intimate scene, but many authors often forget it.
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