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Helo

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Thats really good
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bookness1o1

How does this sound for a description:
          	  
          	  What if the famous Harry Potter wasn’t alone. What if there was a second potter. A hidden potter. Abused and torn apart. A little sister. 
          	  Hidden from the wizarding world for her own safety, Eleanora, or more commonly known as Ellie, is a small girl, shy, timid, no one would ever have guessed that she was in fact the unknown little sister of Harry. Abused by uncle Vernon and aunt Petunia, Ellie needs to learn to survive in a new world, where magic exists, where not everyone is out to hurt her. However, it’s not everyone but that excludes a few people. Knowing how much it would hurt Harry, people try to hurt her. Will her trauma with the Dursleys affect her and her life at Hogwarts or not.
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bookness1o1

First of all, talking on thsi is kinda annoying so here:
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bookness1o1

I don’t have an email for my phone
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bookness1o1

Use my phone number
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bookness1o1

Quick question, I need your help choosing someone to comfort Ellie. Context: this is the day after she gets hurt:
          
          I open my eyes and look at the clock, 6:03. I try to go back to sleep but the aching in my stomach keeps me awake. 
          6:05
          6:06
          6:07
          Omg, I can’t take it. I get up and walk down the stairs belonging to the Weasley family and go outside. 
          The wind brushes my face, cooling me down. 
          The feel of dirt and grass under my bare feet calms me. 
          The slight chirp of birds in the distance reminds me of life. 
          Deciding to sit down, I choose a spot not too far away from the Burrow but not that close either. I sit in the cleaning of the homemade quidditch pitch, bringing my knees to my body and wrapping my arms around them. 
          My thoughts play inside my head like puppets on an unbreakable string. 
          Why did Percy help you? Why did you try that? You shouldn’t have been so harsh on Harry, it’s your fault that he retaliated. 
          I sat there for what felt like seconds when a pair of footsteps came from behind me. I ignored them, consumed by my thoughts. 
          Someone sat down beside me. I didn’t look, I just stared into the distance. Only  partially aware of their presence. 
          “Are you okay?” They asked. It was…
          
          I really have no idea who to put lol

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@bookness1o1 I'm sorry I didn't see that I just read it and I think it should be Fred and/or George because they would be comedic relief but they can be really sweet and caring when it comes to something like this, when she freaking stabs herself with a stick.
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Helo

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Thats really good
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bookness1o1

How does this sound for a description:
            
            What if the famous Harry Potter wasn’t alone. What if there was a second potter. A hidden potter. Abused and torn apart. A little sister. 
            Hidden from the wizarding world for her own safety, Eleanora, or more commonly known as Ellie, is a small girl, shy, timid, no one would ever have guessed that she was in fact the unknown little sister of Harry. Abused by uncle Vernon and aunt Petunia, Ellie needs to learn to survive in a new world, where magic exists, where not everyone is out to hurt her. However, it’s not everyone but that excludes a few people. Knowing how much it would hurt Harry, people try to hurt her. Will her trauma with the Dursleys affect her and her life at Hogwarts or not.
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