IAmTheGirlWhoDreamed

When I think I'm finally coming back to Wattpad? I need to get me story straightened out and a buffer created, and it's not a fan fiction, like foxy or time troubles, but I think it's something you guys will like!

calleighlavinia

Hi, I read your Foxy the Marauder fanfiction and it was great. I just wanted to say that, towards the end i was very confused. I couldn't figure out was was happening and it was hard to follow the story line. I am really sorry if this is not something you wanted to hear. The story line was easy to track up until chapter 14, chapter 15 and onwards was hard to track. I hope you know that i dont mean this in a harmful way at all, and i dont want to discourage you in your writing, as all your readers including me enjoy it. I just wanted to give you some constructive criticism to help you improve your writing. I could always give you some tips if you would like, but it might be a struggle as i am still new to writing stories and learning techniques as well. I hope you dont take this too hard on yourself as you are not the only person new to writing on Wattpad either.
          
          Yours sincerely
          -Calleigh

calleighlavinia

I would also love it if you could check out my story, i just started it and would love some feedback.
            -Calleigh
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calleighlavinia

I am really glad that you have come far as a writer and i can relate to the bad writing as i am only 13. I loved the story and i just thought that i would let you know that it was a bit hard to read through. I will try to read through again and make sense of the story. All in all i loved it.
            -Calleigh
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IAmTheGirlWhoDreamed

@Pufflehuffer101 hey so I wrote this when I was twelve with up to a year I think between chapters 14 and 15. I’m now twenty, have been published twice and am much better at keeping my stories on track and comprehensible! It was one of my first stories on Wattpad, and looking back while I may cringe at how much I still had to grow as a storyteller, I’m glad so many people were able to enjoy it, and I’m glad I’ve come so far as I did. 
            All the best, 
            Kit
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IAmTheGirlWhoDreamed

Can I just say to everyone, I am so sorry for my earlier stories. I am trying to salvage what I can, but they really aren't that good. I'm just glad that some of them I didn't post. 
          
          Anyway, I am proud to say that soon I will be publishing my first novel, not just short story, since I came back on five days ago. It was actually started two years ago and one of the ones that weren't half bad with a bit of editing. 
          
          Thank you for those who are reading and voting for my stories, I really appreciate it and hope you will like my new one. Bye.