ICE9KILLZ_

Somebody please tell me why writing a legitimate novel is so hard . I'm ong so tempted to just post the second chapter of Revelation completely half-done just for the sake of it but I'm a perfectionist fbdkfjeoapf
          	And then I went to Spotify for help and just spend 30 minutes headbanging and completely forgot I was writing in the first place like help???-
          	But uh yeah. 
          	The ravings of a madman

ICE9KILLZ_

@ICE9KILLZ_ YOOO TYSM- lemme go do that with my second chapter 
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AshFlame423

@ICE9KILLZ_ the only advice that will help you in this case, and the one you'll truly use most of the time:
          	  
          	  Every sentence should mean something, add something to the story. Push the characters towards something, show the depths of their soul. But it needs to make sense to the story, every word is crucial. Cut out every sentence and scene that doesn't actually do anything.
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ICE9KILLZ_

@ICE9KILLZ_ Ong I needed that man lmao- do you have any tips for shortening scenes but still making them significant?? Or just cutting out scenes that don't matter? 
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ItzPrincessBastiChan

I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE THINKING- " OMG ANOTHER PLEASE READ MY BOOK WRITER WHO IS DESPERATELY SEARCHING FOR READERS SO THEY CAN FEEL BETTER ABOUT THEMSELVES" AND YES- THAT'S PROBABLY WHAT IM TRYING TO DO RIGHT NOW- 
          
          But pleaseeeee hear me out! The story (Or rather stories) that I'm about to talk to you about may actually end up catching your attention... Why do i think this? Well because i wrote them with sweat and tears. (Not me being melodramatic and all- You may not actually like them, and that's okay, this is just me being extra-) ANYWAYS. LET ME GET TO THE POINT.
          
          The first story I'm going to tell you about is Fobbiden Descendance. This is a fantasy/teen fiction story where a 16-year-old orphan with heterochromia lives her normal teenage life until one day wakes up in a world full of demons. She attends this academy for sorcerers where she learns how to fight with her powers and stuff, and eventually meets the boy of her dreams. 
          
          If for some reason you find this fantasy story to not be of your liking, don't worry, there's still hope.
          
          Because my next story is a romantic teen fiction (High school type of vibe) You will be able to read the synopsis under this message!
          
          I know I have yapped a lot, and you may have probably found me to be a little bit annoying- BUT I'm JUST A WRITER TRYING TO MAKE IT OUT HERE- so please I beg check out the stories- And maybe also vote for them- (Pretty please with a cherry on top-?) 
          
          (I will follow you if you want me to lol, i don't mind.)
          
          I won't take much of your time coz time is precious and we are currently running out of that.
          
           I hope you have a marvellous day and thank you for taking the time to read this message <3333 (Btw i wouldn't mind us being writing buddies too! We could support each others stories!!)
          
          Stories-->
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/366089425-at-the-first-glance
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/366091376-forbidden-descendance

ItzPrincessBastiChan

@ICE9KILLZ_ Thank u so much!!! I really hope u like it <3
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ICE9KILLZ_

@ItzPrincessBastiChan It sounds sick so I'll try it out fs fs! 
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ItzPrincessBastiChan

IGNORE THE ROMANTIC BOOK- I JUST READ YOUR BIO- nhdgeyuejhb
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ICE9KILLZ_

Somebody please tell me why writing a legitimate novel is so hard . I'm ong so tempted to just post the second chapter of Revelation completely half-done just for the sake of it but I'm a perfectionist fbdkfjeoapf
          And then I went to Spotify for help and just spend 30 minutes headbanging and completely forgot I was writing in the first place like help???-
          But uh yeah. 
          The ravings of a madman

ICE9KILLZ_

@ICE9KILLZ_ YOOO TYSM- lemme go do that with my second chapter 
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AshFlame423

@ICE9KILLZ_ the only advice that will help you in this case, and the one you'll truly use most of the time:
            
            Every sentence should mean something, add something to the story. Push the characters towards something, show the depths of their soul. But it needs to make sense to the story, every word is crucial. Cut out every sentence and scene that doesn't actually do anything.
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ICE9KILLZ_

@ICE9KILLZ_ Ong I needed that man lmao- do you have any tips for shortening scenes but still making them significant?? Or just cutting out scenes that don't matter? 
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