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I've posted a story called The School Play and I would like you to read it and tell me what I could improve on

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Hey! My name is Amelia. I am a big fan of 1D and like reading. I am in grade 10 and I am 15. I live in Australia, Northern Queensland. I do dance and help teach. I am one of 3 siblings. I am the eldest and have 2 younger sisters. That is basically most things about me. 
          
          Amelia xx