CredibleCat

@Gamer301095 I'm not that great in giving advise but I'd suggest reading some other peoples story on here to get an idea how to write and mix that with your own style. Both of us have pretty similar themes but are going at it in different ways, I mainly focus on my characters development, its slow at times but that's how I like it, I don't focus much on the relationship side of things mainly how they go about their problems on their own since for me that's where true development comes from, not to rely on other people to help because that never or rarely happens, I try to keep my story pretty realistic. I'd say that your story is pretty good on what it is trying to accomplish, as long as you don't rush and add a bit of extra detail here and there to immerse the reader it'll end up a heart warming story, so keep it up! I do want to see it end.

@ IN_CredibleCat  I'm REALLY sorry that I write under a comment from your own page. I couldn't find another way to write to you.
          	  I only need a bit help with my fanfiction.
          	  The anxiety of Kazinku could be messured as the anxiety I have in real life. With me still being a teenager who's near to finally finish 10th class and has autism, school is very complicated. That's why I try to share and write my fanfiction.
          	  After reading a few chapters of your story, I must say that your work is nearly to perfection. It's so good, I can't even lie.
          	  The problem is just that I now ask myself if I do something wrong. Most of my chapters are pretty short, I'm not writing as detailed as you and I'm in fear that everything feels so uncomfortably bad to read.
          	  Even my plan to (SPOILER!) let the story end after the second year now feels too short. 
          	  I don't want to say that you should feel guilty. I just wanted to know if my story really is ok, or if It's just a pain in everyone's eyes to read it. (You don't have to reply. You can also block or report me if this message was too much. I just wanted to say, or more write, it.)

so sad....