So I'm not sure how good of a writer I am, I personally don't think I'm that good, but I l♡ve constructive critisim. It would help me a bunch and make me a stronger writer. If you guys could comment on what I could do better that would be great!! (Please read my story.) Thanks!! P.S. For those who care enough to click the ...'s I have deleted wattpad because I don't have room and you people are being butts