Hi, Author, I know this is a bit wierd, but I never knew I had you first book on my library. I went on hiatus for about 3 years so I never realized that your book was on my Library.
It kind of piqued my interest so I started to read it this morning since I have a free time, and I love how you play your words.
The plot was some typical "otome game"i-type novel at first, but it took a different turn. Near the ending, the story became more and more surprising. What you just did wasn't a "plot twist" at all. To be exact, your plot was leaving your readers in circles, losing them in the process, making them rely on the storytelling to guess the next event. Those traits made your story more exciting, since it was less predictable, specially how you coated the ending with your final touch.
People would say the plot's complex, but what I saw wasn't that. It wasn't complex, it was "unpredictable".
5 Stars for the rating. You don't seem like you're active based on your updates, but I hope one day, you see this comment. Your story just gave me inspiration, and there a few things I want to discuss with you, if I private message would've been here by this date.
It really weirded me out when I read your Fuyu as Furu. I thought I was the one mistaken. And the Cummer that was supposedly Summer got me rolling in bed(no hate).
As I always keep in mind, “Mistakes are foundations of Mistakes for improvements.”
I hope you find your inspirations in life, if you hadn't found one yet. Keep your pen polished, Keep on bleeding.
—KioshiPen
