@IWorldline
Did u update ur book? I got over 100 notifications saying ur book got updated
@IWorldline r worries thanks for letting me know, sorry for the late reply I’ve been having some problems with notifications recently
toooop 3 on kyw rankss congratulations
where are u author-san
Happy 100 followers
Hello are you still going to update your book? I hope I didn't bother you by asking
Cant wait to read your story!!!:)
You know why your story isn't so good
1.readers love ships but if it's reader book they will prefer readers x characters like shinobu or a harem.
2.why did we trained shinobu and kanae I know
we want a challenge but still that's a little weird
welp that's my opinion.
@Darkstar189 no it’s completely fine please don’t feel apologetic, I would much rather you be honest so I can truly improve
@Cykablytxx you’re welcome sorry if I offended you in anyway with my comment, because that wasn’t my intention, my intention was to point out some things that were at fault and the mistakes you may have made during the story, so that in the future you can improve upon them. So I just want to apologize if I sounded rude during the comment, and I’m going to give you a advice. I think when you’re going to write a new book you should have someone to double check so that they can point out the flaws and I’m pretty sure people on wattpad would love to double check for you if you ask them too. Again this is just my advice so it’s up to you if you’d like to accept it
@Darkstar189 thank you for your feedback this story is more of a experiment to see what people think as it’s my first one in English, but once I finish this I will take your feedback :)
Listen man just wanted to say your demon slayer story is amazing! And keep up the great work
@lolz1375 thank you dude, without you guys I wouldn’t make the story so thank you for your feedback :)