xxjustabeanxx

Hi! I know you're MIA at the moment, but I hope you are doing well! Just found your Percy in Gotham story and it is really good. It's getting harder to find well written stories that I haven't read yet, so it was really nice to read. This is not me pressuring you to update, as I'm sure you're dealing things, but I just want you to know your work is really good. I would love it if you choose to continue the story, but it's your choice. Can't wait to see what you do next and I hope you're alright ❤

suicidepillsplease

Hey so I know that you didnt do this on purpose and I’m not trying to upset you but i just wanted to say about the percy in gotham fic.... wtf was that supposed  racism representation???? It was so inaccurate and honestly kind of offensive, as a person of color, to read. So much so that i couldnt finish the story. I understand you must be a young writer but you have no idea how racism works, how it should be handled in a work environment like in the story, and the impact of these interactions on POCs. Also, i understand that you wanted to make percy a POC but you were doing your story and readers a disservice by writing about a topic you clearly have not researched or personally understood. Hell, I’m probably younger than you so I’m not trying to shame you. But darling, this just ain’t it sis. Also in case you were unaware, the term, “Jap” was a slur against Japanese during and after World War II. And holds A painful legacy from things like the bombing of Hiroshima to the United States Japanese internment camps (where legal US citizens we’re forced to live in deplorable conditions and lost everything after release  because of such racism and prejudice). And even if it has no heat behind it please don’t write racial slurs as a white woman especially the N-word with a hard R (it is the more racist of the two). If you’re going to censor the N-word to make sure you’re censoring the right word. This story honestly just sounds like you’re trying to elevate yourself, like you are above racism or something. Just please stop. Honestly just, just stop. Write about what you know when understand, and talking to a few friends Who happen to be Asian does not represent all other races and backgrounds. Your friends might’ve said it wasn’t offensive to them, but that still doesn’t make this right to publish. I might be going a little too hard on you but you have to understand the demographic the site caters to and how that affects people biases as they age.

lovebur_

@Gemston3 ilysm we lost a great story because of this person like ????? they literally attacked the author
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JackW004

@suicidepillsplease Also if you want to comment back to me, go on ahead, I'm waiting for the hate comments anytime
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JackW004

@Gemston3 Nah man you made plenty of good points. Also, to the person you're commenting to, try to be a bit more polite when you give advice. I couldn't get to your comments because the Author deleted the 2 chapters you commented on, but from here it sounded rude to me. Basic rule of giving advice: Be polite, instructive, and DETAILED. No point in the advice if you end up offending the person. Trust me, once you say something, you can never take it back. Also, I'll be honest, I resent you. A good author has stopped writing (for a while) thanks to your very good advice. Now we can all wait until some random guy comes along and takes this entire story.
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SaintedApollo

Hey, we all understand if you've got something going on, your stories are amazing and we'll all wait patiently for the next update♡ Percy Jackson in Gotham is my favourite! This is *not* a please update message, just saying your work is appreciated

Freakin_Fangirl22

Hello. I'm trying to keep this short. Everyone misses you and have been waiting for your updates. If you are MIA, we understand. If you have something going on at home, our DMs are open and you can talk about it if you would like. I hope you don't take this personally!  we are here for you if you need us! Have a nice day!