Paucorum

Im a little behind in both the reading and writting but is on my way to caugh up. So just felt like writing; keep up the good work with your books : ) 
          
          Even if you have prepared chapters beforehand I'm really impressed by your consistity and the hard work that I assume it took to write what you have written. Even if it is enjoyable to write it also takes time, work and patience ☆
          
          

Paucorum

@I_Try_Writing even if there is no sequel I still find it impressive ☆ And will do my best to complete the chapter relatively soon :)  just have a bit much on my plate going forward so it might not be the quickest : ' ) ♡
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I_Try_Writing

@Paucorum thank you for appreciating my efforts. I'd say it took maybe a year to write Doghead. I'm a little worried I won't write a sequel. It was a lot of work, really tried to make a proper novel and it's easier to write something like killer healing (made for the internet, less effort).
            I look forward to the next chapter of Praline  
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daydreamsrealm

Thanks for the commentary on grammar and opinions and stuff. It makes it feel like I can get better. I have a book series I’m working on that’s not a smut if you’re interested. Just look up Ophelia cloud. That’s my account with books with more shall I say substance.  

opheliacloudsworld

@I_Try_Writing yeah that’s the one. This is my other account 
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I_Try_Writing

@dafiction5 Alasia, is that the one? No immediate promise, but looks interesting.
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daydreamsrealm

Your book ideas are sublime

I_Try_Writing

@dafiction5 Yesss! Mid air cheek clapping is what we're here for!
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daydreamsrealm

@I_Try_Writing dude lizard liaisons is so good.  and no but I’ve been thinking. Why are these so good. Why are you so good at this stuff. ‍♀️ I need to up my game. 
            
            I’m still making them clap cheeks in the air. That’s hilarious. 
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daydreamsrealm

Dude the amount of anxiety that gives me. I had a story stuck on 199 forever. I was like if I need to make another account just to get it up I will. 
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GreyNightsaber

Not trying to kiss butt, but I really like it so far, its easy to get into and the character Jari very likable. 

GreyNightsaber

@GreyNightsaber might be, lol. I'm running on two hours of sleep today, but my simple thinking is, if I can forget where I'm at and lose myself in a read (which i did on my lunch break), it's a good read.
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I_Try_Writing

@GreyNightsaber I dunno... kinda sounds like butt kissing hahaha. Glad you like the main character of Doghead.
             Thank you for the positivity!
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N1XT13

Hello! I wanted to thank you for your comments in The Gladiator's Oath. It helps me make the story make more sense and gives me opportunities to expand on situations. I'm working on a chapter or two daily, and I hope the story lives up to any expectations . At some point, I planned on trying to get it published. I hope you have an amazing day/night!

N1XT13

@I_Try_Writing Personally, the only AI I used is ChatGPT, not to copy and paste but to find ideas for the demon realm in my book, it's a bit hard to come up with an entire culture without any idea of where you're trying to start lol. I'm haven't been on Wattpad in years until this, so I wasn't sure how an appropriately long chapter is, I've just been writing until I felt like it came to an end, or until I ran out of ideas haha 
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I_Try_Writing

@N1XT13 absolutely that's understandable, i apologise for mentoining AI. makes sense that you got a bit carried away when starting. When I first decided to upload to WP i dumped several long chapters all at once haha.
            I struggle with making silly mistakes, very recently started using AI to help edit. Flipping between tenses is espeicially bad in my writing.
            Good luck!
            Honestly for WP, the length of your chapters is perfect, quick easy reads.
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N1XT13

@I_Try_Writing an extension, some of the chapters are already pre written as I used to start and stop, I'd go in, edit, and finish them before publishing. I used to have a big problem with procrastinating and there are several that were just sitting there until I picked them back up. Thank you for the advice on schedule, it will probably be a good tactic and make me have time to make the chapters longer, recently I had a bad habit of "i can't sleep until this chapter is finished" but the next chapter I'll take your words in mind. Thank you
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TravelingSaint

Hey pal, since Killer Healing is a finished book, I'm going to enjoy it as a reader providing feedback on what I enjoy, but not with any critiques. However, if you would like a full story analysis and critique, I would be more than happy to get one typed up for you once I finish reading. Just let me know:)

I_Try_Writing

@TravelingSaint Now with consistent tense and improved clarity! Last section schelduled for May 12th.
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I_Try_Writing

@TravelingSaint ha, there's an authors note on first chapter, feedback welcome but project is for fun haha, so i think... you're OK- you might be dissapointed lol. also not finished yet- finishing soon. plus don't stress yourself, your book plus your much appreciated feedback on doghead come first. Thank you for your support.
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TravelingSaint

Most esteemed and noble Sir,
          I bid thee a fair morn on this day of March, in the year of our Lord. It hath come to my attention that this day bear the title of Friday. Thus, with the utmost reverence, I find myself in a state of patient anticipation, eagerly awaiting the next chapter of Doghead, which I beseech thee to bestow upon us at thy earliest convenience.

TravelingSaint

@I_Try_Writing I'm in Eastern Daylight time, so its 10:15 for me. But do what's right for your larger base of readers. I just wanted to let you know vi sam looking forward to it! 
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I_Try_Writing

@TravelingSaint what timezone you in? I was aiming for I think 11:30am central...
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TravelingSaint

Can’t read it yet, but I’m  excited to see what happens to Jari in the chapter you just dropped!

TravelingSaint

@I_Try_Writing you’re welcome! Plus that gives you time to work on another project 
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I_Try_Writing

@SSMythos Thank you so much for taking the time to write all this, makes sense. 43 parts divided by 3 is 14.333, divided by two would be 21.5 weeks... seems a long time... 
            much appreciated. think I'll go for two.
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TravelingSaint

Oh ok that makes sense in regards to moonlighting then! 
            
            Yes three a week is to much. I’d read three a week, but still haha. You want to let the algorithm work for you, and to do that you need to consistently be pushing chapters. Three a week will cut down how long you can publish for. If you’re gonna publish one a week, take a look at your readers demographics and post on Friday afternoon where most of your readers are. If you want to do two a week, then I would recommend Wednesday afternoon’s and on Saturday around noon. 
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