Conversations de Makayla Robinson (@IbanezGiored)

GruviaFanatic

Aug 10, 2015

well the story is actually for you and not for me.

IbanezGiored

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I don't fucking care! 
            u can write it! fuck giving me all the credit for it!
            I'm going to write my book the way I intended it to be.

Aug 10, 2015 • Répondre

GruviaFanatic

Aug 10, 2015

I have a new story. all credits goes to you. I'm still editing it but I want you to take a look. it's the exact sane as yours just added a few changes. Please take a look at it.

IbanezGiored

@GruviaFanatic kk whatever
            I'll check it out

Aug 10, 2015 • Répondre

GruviaFanatic

Aug 10, 2015

nope. not here to bash or anything. I really like your new story. I like how it goes.

GruviaFanatic

Aug 10, 2015

i like the help you with your story so message me back. :-)

IbanezGiored

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@GruviaFanatic actually I decided that I'm going to write my story the way I want to and u don't have to read it if u don't want to.
            I don't really need ur shit, so let me use my creativity. thank u ☺

Aug 10, 2015 • Répondre

GruviaFanatic

Jun 01, 2015

The story is beyond cliché... IT'S SO CLICHÉ.

GruviaFanatic

Jun 01, 2015

Honestly I think The New Recruit book is lazy, it lacks description, imagination, and talent. The story goes so fast, Ender doesn't sound like Ender, and it's OA. Makayla, or whoever she is lacks soo much and that is being great. Sorry but I think you have yo learn how to write.