I'm re-reading ESC (Everything Slightly Changes) and, yeah.
I'm going to rewrite it.
- Griphon's personality will slightly change. So will Ari's.
- Everything will move slower, so you can take it all in, but I'll be fixing my use of time. (I.E.: We won't still be on day one after chapter 10. That's moving it so slowly and it's just so bad. I mean, if you were driving away from a chimera, flying to some random house that your friend somehow knows the location of, and then meet up with some guy you apparently have a crush on and they explain everything to you and then you have night terrors and it's still dark when you wake up; how much time do you think would have passed? Probably about 14 to 15 hours. Probably more.
But not, instead, I slammed it all in there and the time seemed to be like 4 hours.
Not good.)
- It'll go by a new title
- Nellie will still be there. She'll still be a big figure of authority and respect in Ari's and Griphon's lives but I'm going to be cutting her out of the picture a little more.
- More romance dude
- It's gonna be gayer
- Like really gay actually
