Icegold2004

Hello everyone, I'm still alive, and writing my story.  I know it been a long time, but I'm still continuing (I was busy with life and playing new games.) and I'm here to announce that I am rewriting the whole story, and possibly posting my story in another website.
          
          When I first started this story, I had no idea what was a I doing as I just write stuff that pop in my head. And rereading my chapters, I realise that it look bad with some plot holes and stuffs.
          
          So I am rewriting the whole with new things like:
          
          Goddess/Death/Eva will not fake her own death and disappeared on her family, as I realise that is a dumb idea to do. So she is staying with her family.
          
          The HellForge Legion will appear early with the Black Hands in the invasion and the Gluttony Demons show up later on.
          
          Some characters changes. Like the Brothers' names will change (SinWalker is now named Germanus, and LightWalker is now named Caelum)
          
          The Horseman's army will have a missive changes.
          
          And other things that I'm lazy to write.
          
          So anyway, hope you enjoy the Prologue I will post soon as I start writing the other Prologue with Sideralux and his party before the invasion.
          
          Goodbye and see you later... If I don't die or something.

A new chapter is up today, and it will explain why it took so long at the bottom.

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!