Chapter One is out! Finally! Sorry it’s taken so long, I’m slow. Please leave as much feedback as possible. I want to make sure my writing is as good as I can make it, so any suggestions or advice you might have for me is gratefully accepted. The longer I work on my writing the more I hate it, but I think it’s just a result of me staring at it for ages. So my own opinion is not always reliable when it comes to judging myself. That’s why I need y’all to make sure my characters and plot lines aren’t behaving too bipolar (changing up too dramatically throughout chapters). Thanks, y’all rock.
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