@SIDDHIAMRALE Hello there! I am not usually criticizing other's work. But based on what I've learned in my previous subject - Creative Writing. In writing a story, you must have a catchy prelusive. What would be on it? First, the introduction must hook the attention of the readers. Second, the personalities who will impersonates the characters being used by the author must be well-known person/s. Third, every chapters must have a thrill, you must end your chapter by leaving the readers' mind a question that they will be able to read the next chapter. And lastly, the author should be gullible and have the eagerness to read someone's correction, comments and suggestions.
I hope this can help you and welcome to the world of authors!
Have a nice day.