Ichigo_jukyuu

This is to notify my readers that the story '100 Days' are hanging for now, wait for the further updates. Thank you so much. 

SIDDHIAMRALE

Hi there! I am SIDDHI
          Well, I have written a book named The Silence
          I would love your suggestions and comments about it as I am new here!

SIDDHIAMRALE

Well my hearty thanks for the cute lessons!
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Ichigo_jukyuu

@SIDDHIAMRALE Hello there! I am not usually criticizing other's work. But based on what I've learned in my previous subject - Creative Writing. In writing a story, you must have a catchy prelusive. What would be on it? First, the introduction must hook the attention of the readers. Second, the personalities who will impersonates the characters being used by the author must be well-known person/s. Third, every chapters must have a thrill, you must end your chapter by leaving the readers' mind a question that they will be able to read the next chapter. And lastly, the author should be gullible and have the eagerness to read someone's correction, comments and suggestions. 
            I hope this can help you and welcome to the world of authors! 
            Have a nice day.
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