Hi everyone
I just published a story today, please help read it and comment on it, ii mostly need your opinion on it so I'd be able to improve myself and my writing.
The title of my story is "My Words_Volume 2" or you can follow this link to read it, http://my.w.tt/UiNb/iN2QYju4pB
Thank You... I Love You.
-Sfanele