IcyIceCuber

Chapter 2 of Enchanted Darkness is out now <333 Hope it isn't as dry as Chapter 1!!

FictionWorld2025

Thanks for voting. Sorry about my awful stories.

FictionWorld2025

@Creativemind703 @IcyIceCuber Thanks love, and that's okay! :)
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IcyIceCuber

@Creativemind703 Noooo you're gonna be a great writer someday! And I'm sorry for my stories their all in WIP :")
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AKIMISAN8

hi wanna do read for reads? and follow for follow?

AKIMISAN8

it's alright and thxx
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IcyIceCuber

Finishing Chapter 2 of Enchanted Darkness right now, but I just wanna say the reason why the first chapters of Enchanted Darkness are so dry and pushy, is because I wrote the first chapters under pressure and I was still getting out of writer's block :") And I had no idea how to start Vincent's story with a fresh start, but I promise it'll get better over time <33 And I will probably go back to edit it so yeahhh

IcyIceCuber

@MariTheGhostlyBeast Ohhh! Aww, hearts to you too <3333
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MariTheGhostlyBeast

@IcyIceCuber Oh... I wanted to add a heart emoji, but they didn't show it to the campaign :,)
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IcyIceCuber

@MariTheGhostlyBeast Did you write a message? Because I can't see it :)
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IcyIceCuber

If you haven't already seen my Instagram post, Destruction getting a revamped version <3 Meaning, it'll be heavily edited so please expect alot of new chapters :)) It'll take an awful long time to get that revamepd version finished, however, writing oneshots will be my breaks and my two other books will have more published chapters <3

IcyIceCuber

Well, won't you look at that? Another announcement :D
          •MAJOR SPOILERS TO DESTRUCTION
          •THE STORY WILL BE GETTING HEAVILY EDITED
          First off, I know I don't like getting criticized and getting advice from other people unless if I feel like I need it- Its really because of my lifestyle and how I perfer rolling my way and not listening to other people's writing advice for me.
          But now, I'm asking advice for how I can change a few major scenes in my story, Destruction. I've been working on the facts of the story in my ending celebration, which consisted in me going back to the book and reading it to find more facts. But when I was reading it, I realized that there are alot of children violence- and I really don't feel comfortable with the amount of children fighting scenes I wrote.
          Which is why I'm asking on how I can change a few fights and how Carson and his three bullies died, without giving too much violence but still making it detailed.
          The reason why I want their deaths and fights to be detailed is because they're major characters and Carson's backstory is 27 chapters long (which I feel like his death deserves more details.) And also the fights they have, they're pretty major in the story.
          I know I can just change their age and all but there are quite a few reasons why I don't.
          With that being said, if anyone has the time, please help me out over here :>

IcyIceCuber

@MariTheGhostlyBeast It's okay! I'll find some other way, you've already supported enough <3
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MariTheGhostlyBeast

@IcyIceCuber    I don't even know how to help you with this:(
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IcyIceCuber

Bueno, ¿no mirarás eso? Otro anuncio :D
            • PRINCIPALES SPOILERS DE LA DESTRUCCIÓN
            • LA HISTORIA SERÁ EDITADA EN GRAN MEDIDA
            En primer lugar, sé que no me gusta que me critiquen y recibir consejos de otras personas a menos que sienta que lo necesito, es realmente por mi estilo de vida y cómo me inclino y no escucho los consejos de escritura de otras personas para mí.
            Pero ahora, estoy pidiendo consejo sobre cómo puedo cambiar algunas escenas importantes en mi historia, Destrucción. He estado trabajando en los hechos de la historia en mi celebración final, que consistió en volver al libro y leerlo para encontrar más hechos. Pero cuando lo estaba leyendo, me di cuenta de que hay mucha violencia infantil, y realmente no me siento cómodo con la cantidad de escenas de lucha de niños que escribí.
            Es por eso que estoy preguntando cómo puedo cambiar algunas peleas y cómo Carson y sus tres matones murieron, sin dar demasiada violencia, pero aún así haciéndolo detallado.
            La razón por la que quiero que sus muertes y peleas sean detalladas es porque son personajes importantes y la historia de fondo de Carson tiene 27 capítulos (lo que siento que su muerte merece más detalles). Y también las peleas que tienen, son bastante importantes en la historia.
            Sé que puedo cambiar su edad y todo, pero hay bastantes razones por las que no lo hago.
            Dicho esto, si alguien tiene tiempo, por favor ayúdame aquí :>
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IcyIceCuber

Oh. My. Gosh- ENCHANTED DARKNESS CHAPTER 1 IS PUBLISHED ❤❤

IcyIceCuber

@MariTheGhostlyBeast You're so sweet  Thank you very much!!!
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IcyIceCuber

Omg omg after what? 20 tries? I finished writing the first chapter of Enchanted Darkness! Don't look forward to it because its trash, but I just wanted to get my excitement out <3 I still need to edit it though, but if you ever take the time to actually read that garbadge, hope you enjoy :)

MariTheGhostlyBeast

@IcyIceCuber   Don't say that :( You have great stories
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IcyIceCuber

⚠ITS NOT PUBLISHED YET⚠ My bad, I need to edit it before I actually publish. I feel like I have a few grammar mistakes, quick transitions, and tons of other things I need to fix. So with that being said, I need to edit before publishing.
            Basically-
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IcyIceCuber

Its either I take multiple breaks from pressuring myself into trying to write a good first chapter with a good headstart and good transitions or I geniunely don't have the motivation to write-

IcyIceCuber

and the fact that I'm reading fruity ass stories to keep me motivated and catched on my English says everything.
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IcyIceCuber

Hello! Hope your having a nice day/afternoon/night.
          
          I'm sorry for killing your notifications with my announcements :") But I have come to post this message that the book Enchanted Darkness will be getting unpublished.
          The cover is a mess, the prologue is bad, and I have the plot written down- its just that I can't find a perfect intro. All in all, that book is a complete mess. So I'm unpublishing it to find a way to form that book into a "glow up."
          Getting that book into a new shape will affect my time here in Wattpad. Therefore, it may take me some time to start publishing again because of that unfortunate problem.
          (P.S I might publish more oneshots for "breaks.")
          
          Lots of love- Icy

IcyIceCuber

@Mari145NtkEJ2 Thank you so much!!! You have all the good art :)
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MariTheGhostlyBeast

@IcyIceCuber Whatever you say, but I think you have all the good stories
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