MochiTheAuthor

Hey! I saw you didn't like your name. You should change it to your warrior name. You can do that.

IdontWantAnAccountI

@yourlocalbookcat hmm. I’m planning on changing it, right now I’m  just indecisive on what to change it to. Maybe I will use my warrior name, I’ll have to think about it.
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MochiTheAuthor

Hey 
          
          I'm bookcat 
          
          I am also a new author
          Your stories are so good! 
          Keep going! 
          I would appreciate if you looked at my stories? 
          
          Behold darkness and houndclaw's hiss
          
          　　　　∧＿∧
          　　　　(*･∀･*)
          ★*。:ﾟ*〇☆〇*ﾟ:。:*★
          ☆｡*･:+*ﾟ　　 ﾟ*+:･*｡☆
          　      THANK YOU 
          ･*･ﾟﾟﾟﾟ･*･ﾟﾟﾟﾟ･*☆･*

MochiTheAuthor

@IdontWantAnAccountl 
            
            Yeah lol I am like that too. When someone reads my story or even posts something on my wall I WAYYYYY overreact. 
            
            Tysm for reading one of my book 
            I don't want you to think I'm mean right now but you asked for your mistakes. There's only 2 things. 
            1.Make your chapters a little longer. If you don't already before you post read your paragraph/chapter over and you will see any typos. I.e what accidentally typos into ehat. 
            
            2. Write more descriptive. Like instead of "She walked out of the den"
            "As she walked out if the den her fluffy, white tail streaked/streamed out behind her" 
            
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IdontWantAnAccountI

@yourlocalbookcat 
            
            Thank you! You have no idea how much this means to me lol
            I will check out some of your stories, if it doesn’t bother you can you tell me what you like about my stories and how I can make them better because I want to improve them
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