Hanailen
Hey so while your book is interesting (the Rise Against one ) there are a few things that you have wrong for one tim doesn’t rob anyone he’s a sweetheart who would be against that the whole band would be two he doesn’t drink and three he doesn’t just go to peoples houses since most of the time he’s recording and on tour the story is interesting but I don’t appreciate my favourite singer being turned into the bad guy and he wouldn’t either
Hanailen
@Idontwatchuslp thank you for taking my advice without getting offended I never meant to say what I said to be mean I just love Rise Against but your story was good but I think you should change it to Tim and the rest of the band saving the main character from a real villain and maybe the band can offer to protect him and his friends as this is what tim would do in real life and he would get to meet his idol in a positive light :) thank you
Idontwatchuslp
@user082549015879 hey thank you for the feed back. I was just having fun with the story and just added in random moments and i have been thinking about restarting on the story for awhile now and will gladly accept any ideas and give credit for them.
