kikoanna
thnx a lot, @leatairplanes, It would be grateful if you you share this story around and help in giving your opinion and ideas. Thnx a lot once again and its really nice to have a reader like you encouraging us....
peachy4
HEY! No, Bruno Mars is mine! haha congrats on first place on the PFS one shot! I really liked it too, it was really cool how you went back on the main parts of the story like the sand :)