Your film script is really good, making a psychopath relatable to for the audience is a real achievement. Character development is well done, the schizophrenia was a nice touch. Using the same voiceover at the start and the end is effective, and it sounds like you got the cinematography spot on. It reflects on how easily violence can turn people against certain ethnic groups, like the hate crime increase after the Woolwich attack :( Also great horror elements. Great stuff!