IheartScar

@theNormIsCraziness Your welcome : )

IheartScar

@theNormIsCraziness Yeah as you can tell I like love Big Bang. I'm trying to find a good editor. Also I rewrote the first 5 chapters last night. I just fixed it made some things clear. I made her seem tired and not able to do much ice skating in the first chapter and took out a lot of the gory parts in the first chapter just to make it feel more real. Thank you for your help.

OnePieceLover22

Oh my goosh! You like kpop, don't you?
          
          (In response to your comment on my critique.)
          You could probably put your story on hold for awhile while you go back and revise each chapter. If you didn't upload the chapters from a text file, then you can copy and paste your chapters into Word or something and print it out to revise it, which is what I do with my chapters.
          You can also grab an editor and swap email addresses to pick out every mistake that you made throughout your chapters. It's a quick fix, really, even though it may seem like a lot of work.

IheartScar

I never really thought of myself as a writer. I enjoy writing and it is my whole life. I guess every writer one time in their life has been told they are horrible at writing. But to hear it from someone you care about is the worst feeling. Everytime I write something I ask myself "Am I even a good at writing?" knowing you have to believe in your writing is something every writer has to have but I don't know anymore.