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I would love for some of you  to read my book and tell me how I'm doing so far thank you 

boy:writes a poem about the girls bff and sets it as his wallpaper once the boy told the girl he loves her and as been lying to her the whole time and was always in love with her best friend.
          boy: gives her the phone without thinking 
          girl: reads it and stop and knew she was talking about her best friend she throws the phone at him.
          boy: looks at her and says u read it didn't u 
          girl: walks away and says yes with stupidity in her heart she felt like she was just being used because he told her he loves her 
          ONE DAY PASSES 
          boy: comes to the girls house with bouquet of flowers to tell her he's sorry. 
          girl: throws the flowers at him 
          boy: shouts that poem was about u 
          girl: stops and picks up the flowers picked one out and gave the rest back to him and says"give the rest to her I know u love her" 
          boy: smiles and gives her a hug thank u I will always love u 
          girl: I know I will always love u to 
          they both turn around and start to cry 
          and left their own way.

girl:do u like me 
          boy:No 
          girl: I'm a pretty 
          boy: no 
          girl: if I left would u cry 
          boy: no 
          girl got sad and heard to much and left 
          boy: grabed her arm u No I don't like u I love you and no your not pretty your beautiful and if u left I wouldn't cry I'll die 
          girl: cries and hugs him 
          boy: never ask so much silly questions cuz my answer will be better than what u want to hear 
          girl: I love u