Danielle

A little constructed criticism- lag a bit, let it tense up and drag it out with their feelings, don't push them into it right away. I love your stories and I hope to see more soon.

Hey there! Um, I'm a fan of GH, therefore a fan of ur work and I just wanted to give u a little advice on getting some more popularity on ur stories: U should stick on a few tags! I know I'm inexperienced with this kinda stuff, but I thought it might help... So yeah, keep them updates comin'!