Hannah

Hannah:
          I was wondering if you might be interested in reading my story that I am writing.  It's a romance, however the prologue does have a little shock factor to it.  I am looking for honest people that can give me some feedback and noticed that you like romance novels and thought, why not ask.  In case you say yes, here is my link:
          http://www.wattpad.com/2276062-my-first-love
          
          Thanks,
          Becky
          

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls