OpalWood21

I remember reading this a while ago and loved it. Just wish I could find out how the main characters’ relationship develops throughout the story. I can imagine the oc creating his own version of chidori that enhances his speed and utilizes his extendable claws

OpalWood21

Hello, I just wanted to post a message to tell you that I am a fan of your story and can’t wait to read more. If you don’t mind constructive criticism: your plot line is good, but there seem to be some grammatical and spelling issues that would be worth looking into. Hope you decide to update this story soon ‍♀️