@Im_a_nerd3 I love your story and as I implied in my comment it is YOUR story and no one has any right to tell you what to do with it (yes we can comment on things we would like to see in the story but if it doesn't fit your view of the story in general you could discard the opinion) but it's simply that an opinion. If someone does not read a story because it doesn't fit the parameters they like, it is good for them, but to imply that they, as a reader, have the power to control the author is idiotic. If they don't like the course of the story, they can simply drop it; I have done so on multiple occasions with other stories. Sorry for the long rant, author-san. Have a wonderful day, and I will continue waiting for what is going to happen next.