IrisW3694

Oh! I just saw the last comment on the last chpt of my book! I can’t reply now that I deleted it so I will do it here!
          
          I thought you were a better writer because I have the sh!ttyest sense of romance possible:D you can see that in da book “ Countryhuman senerio” at the comment section. can you tell me how to improve? :’)

Imdotdot_666

@IrisW3694 about writing romance or just how to improve your writing? I dont know much but I hope I can help:D When I write romance between characters, I often use romantic words that has a deep meaning, like adoration which is just an alternative form of "love". Also, when writing romance, I use some love qoutes inspiration to create some sincere love by the other through words. Why does it seem complicated to understandT-T Tell me if you dont understand:')
            
            About improving writing, I am still learning, though, a friend gave me tips! She said, Avoid using the same words more often, like "love". Back when I was still practicing writing romance, I always use the word "love" but now that my friend told me that, I started to learn some other terms for love and some other words. For example, beautiful, the other terms are; Pretty, stunning, charming, pleasant, lovely, gorgeous and more.
            
            She also told me to learn how to properly use pronouns, and I thought, if a pronoun like she/he fits in the sentence, it would be it but I was totally wrong>:) 
            
            And then the grammar and spellings and the use of punctuation marks which im sure you already know!
            
            Your writing is already amazing! But, I guess you still need some practice if your not satisfied with how you write, like me:']
            
            Hope this at least helps youT-T
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Coffee_Roles

Read it all!
          
          We are true friends.
          
          We ride together, we die together.
          
          Send this to everybody you care about, including me, if you care.
          See how many times you get this.
          
          I want you to know you are an amazing friend, till death and forever.
          If I don't get this back, I understand.
          
          But I have a game for you.
          
          Once you read this letter, you must send this to 15 people, including me.
          
          If you get at least three back, you are loved.
          
          Nobody knows how important something is, until they lose it.
          
          Tonight, (right at 12:00pm) the person you love will realize they love you.
          
          Then, at 1:00pm to 2:00pm, be ready for the shock of your life!
          
          If you break this chain, you will have bad luck.
          
          With love, send this to the 15.
          
          If you don’t, you will turn ugly in one year.
          
          A friend told me to do this, so pass it on.
          
          Tomorrow, two boys/girls will ask if they can have your number.
          
          Send this message to 15 nice people or bad luck starts for a whole year.
          This is not fake.
          
          Also like your pfp

Lonely__stranger

Hi! Thank you for adding my book to your reading list! 

Lonely__stranger

@ Imdotdot_666  oh, don't worry about it! Thank you so much for the compliment! 
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Imdotdot_666

@Lonely__stranger Hello!! Sorry for late reply! And your welcome! Your book was really good, keep up the good work!❤
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Zach-cherry16

Ay man, Lets use a similar picture for a profile (Note: Im finna be outside ur house if u wont agree)