Thinking about writing a story. I'm not sure how I feel about it yet... Here is an exert from one of the chapters I have Written. I would absolutely love some feedback!!!
Here is the prologue..David and his family go camping. When all of a sudden his littlest sister, only three years old goes missing. David will get the shock of his life.
Elijah Keepers and his wife Rose, never expected to find anything extraordinary on their hike. Much to their surprise, this little hike will change their lives forever.
Exert...
Elijah Keepers was sitting nervously in one of the dining room chairs. His wife had boughten them days before. He had flowers and kitchen knives on the table. The knives had a bow on them, the flowers smelled sweet. They should, after all they’re her favorite.He tapped nervously on the checkered blue and white table cloth.Impatiently waiting for her to return from work.She will be so happy we’ve been talking about it for months, never taking the time to do things. Like always, we talk of children, but we’re both too focused on our careers. We talk of a bigger house, we talk of moving, buying stocks, going on a second honeymoon.We talk of doing several things together.We just don’t have the time.We don’t have the time to be husband and wife, so we don’t take the time to play it.This This we’ve been talking about, something not to big.But something that would build us up more, a moment where we actually don’t have to pretend to play happily married couple. We will actually be the name the was given to them.Husband and Wife.