ImmaNaughtyGirlFck

So the story for your first one was pretty good,  I have to say but if you do need a little help with the punctuation and errors. It's clear to tell that you either wrote this one your phone or a tablet or something and that is what is wrong. I'm being honest, but everything else is absolutely swell and I hope you continue coming up with great ideas. 
                                                              -Breezy 

Thanks!