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@s43k06 lmao im sure the late reply to this does not help my case but IM NOT PROMISE!! I just tend to spend more time on a separate account asdfghjkl sorry for replying so late!!

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@Clumsypanda3213 glad I was able to help, and thanks for the follow!

@ImmaSadSausage oh, that makes more sense! Thank you so much! :) I’ll go through it today and fix it lol

@Clumsypanda3213, I read your story and it was very well written! There was really only one thing I noticed and you probably just forgot to put it in since many other sentences had it. When you write dialogue, after they talk you put a comma at the end of the sentence if it describes the way they say it, and a period if there's action after they talk. That explanation was a bit confusing, so here's some examples:
            
            "I can't believe I'm finally here," she said in awe, her gaze drifting between the towering buildings.
            
            "I told you." Then he stood swiftly and left, leaving the girl alone in the empty room.
            
            That's it! I loved your story, and I'm honored that I'm someone you felt could give you helpful advice! I'm excited for the new chapters!

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