ImmortalGoddess13

I have uploaded 5 short poems in my new book titled "I get lost inside my mind".
          	That is all I have for now. Will upload more when I write them. Enjoy. And thank you.

ronda1985

In Dil Death?  Does he cheat on her as I don’t read adultery/cheating. If you could let me know I would deeply appreciate it. The authors on here are deeply kind to The readers  and don’t care  to let me know. Thank you.

ImmortalGoddess13

No.
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ronda1985

Till Death
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ChristineFair

Ok - I have a few issues with this book 1. Restraining orders and criminal charges are treated separately and warrants are not issued nor our cases with attorneys present dismissed if someone doesn't show up.  2. Never once have I seen a woman happy to have killed the father of her child.  That left a bad taste in my mouth.  3. Tony was a product of his own cycle of abuse so what chance did he have and usually DV classes and group therapy is part of of the criminal charges portion IN DV cases.  Lastly Tony never was a drug user Just abused alcohol - Really alcohol is considered just as damaging with a strict recovery plan that you have to want as much as drug addiction.  Lastly - to show happiness after killing someone - WTF - Congrats you just taught your daughter people are disposable and can I read one book where the knight in shinning Armour doesn't show up. And on a side note - when you are divorcing someone who "vanishes" you don't have to wait for an arrest to get it finished to be "free" - Granted by default happens more times that you think. It takes the average DV victim 6 times before they leave their abuser for good and this main character did it successfully on the first try with just brushing off the dust and moving on bc of her secret transfers on a joint account - NO way would that ever have happened in reality every dime of money is used as a way to controll the victim.  When you do leave you need a plan that allows you to stay hidden bc this where most DV cases become homicides and watch the movie The Burning Bed - She took care of him too and it's based of a true story - She was still arrested and put on trial, Larana Bobbit, Laura Kellog, and she went to prison.

ChristineFair

 I like the story and it's your story so take it for a grain of salt I just wanted to share my thoughts on where I think this good story can become a realistic one that puts a more human face to this with a realistic perspective on what happens and how kids are affected by it even if they are too young to remember.  Their is an amazing program for kids of DV called Amanda's Easil and it's basically Art Therapy for kids who have experienced DV bc the "cycle" is what needs to be broken from the abusive generation to next.  Sorry its so long and I'm not trying to anger anyone I was just giving you proven through practice info and all that is involved in DV.  When I got to the part of him being in a hotel where he was for awhile and still not served his warrant - That is one useless police dept for not finding him in the time span of 5 years especially with him staying in one place where your name is part of tge registration attache to the room your in- The house would not sit open and available  5 yrs later as well.
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ImmortalGoddess13

New story  'Till death' is now published in its entirety. This story was a tough one to write due to the nature of it and I even found myself upset writing it. 
          I do hope you read it, comment on it, share it. Whatever. Just be honest. 
          Thank you.

ImmortalGoddess13

Thank you so much. It was a heart wrenching story to write. I appreciate your feedback.
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AshlehQueen

@ImmortalGoddess13 It was the best story. I will recommend it to all of my readers in my next update. Stay blessed. It was after a long time that I read something.
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