ImmortalMortar

I will not be making stories, but I will however, make a powerscaling book, it might take a while considering how I yap so much

ImmortalMortar

Generally speaking, Deku is more stronger, and I have a lot of things to back it up

ImmortalMortar

Naruto, Invincible, Omni Man, Luffy
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Toastmurderer

@ImmortalMortar who are you comparing him to?
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ieatkisde

Heyyyy so I thought it will be a good  idea to share my first fanfic to your  beloved followers with you so I hope you don't mind  :]
          ( I can't put the link of the fanfic here for some reason so plsssss tap my profile and check out my story lol)
          
          FANFIC NAME: smarty and happy assistant! ( scientistTVman x tvman!reader)

ImmortalMortar

if you see a story with a bio as a chapter then you already know the writer is lazy

Toastmurderer

@Minh20687 he’s not wrong actually. Many stories I’ve read thag have bios as a chapter are generally, sloppy, lazy and not well written
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Minh20687

@ImmortalMortar ?
            IKD what’s going on.
            Could you tell me what happened?
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ImmortalMortar

Hello everyone, as you may all know that I haven't updated on the lookism fanfiction that I remake, but I can give you a very valid reason, one because the original series kept updating and updating and debunking all theories about Charles Choi having a second body, which makes my entire plot confusing due to how the timeline is so messed up. I'm currently on a progress to fix all the things I made and make the series better. Until then, no updates, as usual

ImmortalMortar

Following the announcement I made today. 
          
          What I'm trying to say is that, the future Izuku expected us to see wasn't even that good, yes he is still a Hero, but only because of the help of his friends who funded a suit that is a replication of his own powers, meaning that he only gets to become a hero after receiving the case.
          
          The ending shows how their story came to a conclusion, not "His" story came into conclusion. Most fans sees that Izuku could have become the Number 1 Hero, or become much more, people even expected him to died while trying to save Shigaraki but no.
          
          What's worse is that the final battle didn't even make sense with the conclusion. Izuku was meant to save Shigaraki, but failed. Yes he won the war but he didn't win the battle, he didn't achieved anything and I personally think that's the reason for this ending. If Horikoshi went to that path then the story could have taken a better turn

ImmortalMortar

Now that MHA is finished. I decided to reread the Manga just to make my mind lear and to see what issues does it have and surely enough their is.
          
          Now I'm not addressing this as a hate or trashing, but rather criticizing the series. 
          
          One of the things I noticed is that Deku wasn't able to achieved his perfect ambition. The beginning of the story was a narrative sentence to how he becomes a hero and later on he just became a hero of the month. Now I'm not trashing but I'm just stating that Horikoshi did Izuku dirty. Yes he did rushed the story, but if he's gonna atleast rush it then he could have just given it a proper pacing and a good climax.
          
          First, all of Class 1A managed to achieved something much more surpassing than what Deku has. Shoji who is a side character of the series manages to become a spokesman for those with mutation Quirks, kinda making him a Professor X of the series. Kaminari and Jiro started their own agency together. Uraraka, Iida, Momo, and Tsuyu we're one of the biggest reason why criminal rate drops, and Kirishima was able to become the Manliest Hero.
          
          It's safe to say that all of Class 1A has a successful life, but Izuku didn't which kinda bothers me because the ending didn't have any relation to his ambitions at all. 1. People remembered him and mostly blamed him for the destruction Shigaraki and All For One has brought to Japan. 2. Izuku was barely even look up to and most people only acknowledge him for his bravery. This entire thing is just like Sport Festival ending result.