Meshii
hi i started reading Silent Angel and I have to say you need to decided whether you want it to be in 3rd person or 1st person. I have been reading it for a few chapters now and I keep seeing 'my' and it really makes it hard to read and understand. in case you don't know, my isn't a word that belongs in 3rd person stories unless its speech. I'm sorry if it came across as rude, it's nit supposed to and its supposed to inform you of an error that has occurred a lot