IndiDoughnuts

Did I ever share this??? I don't think I did!!! Anyways, here's chapter 3 of Adversus! Also, please, PLEASE comment your story titles below so I can read them!!! I have time this weekend finally and will be making a list SO COMMENT YOUR BOOKS BELOW!!!
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/95625372

IndiDoughnuts

Hey everyone!
          
          As most might have noticed, I've been on a long break this last month with updates for Neon Magic because of my current situation. Because of this, I am going to put Neon on hold to stock pile on some more chapters for it so that if this does ever happen again everyone can still get there weekly updates!
          
          In the meantime, I already have 15 chapters written for Adversus (they still need to be edited before posting because MAN are they bad lol) but I thought since I already have a stockpile there I would share what I got with you guys. So expect an update every Friday and maybe another on Wednesday!
          
          I hope you enjoy the first book I wrote on wattpad and please let me know what you think <3
          
          XOXO,
          
          Indi
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/95625372

IndiDoughnuts

Hello everyone,
          
          I am having internet trouble and won’t be to active because of this. New chapter should be out once I can get a good burst of internet! Let’s just say that internet in the country is SUPER unreliable and I can’t wait to get back to the city 
          
          Thanks y’all!
          
          Indi

IndiDoughnuts

Hello Everyone! I have an update today! If you are an avid reader of Neon Magic, I highly suggest you go back and read chapters 6, 7, and 8! Chapters 4 and 5 have been combined as well so there is one less chapter then what you were probably used to. Each of these chapters (6, 7, and 8) have had IMPORTANT story info added to them! Please go back and check them out when you can and the newest chapter update will be coming out this Friday. Thank you all for your patience <3 This last week has been crazy for me and I apologize for my absence. But once I get chapter 9 out I will have time to read again and I AM SO STOKED FOR THAT!!!

StephRose1201

@IndiDoughnuts I love what you did with 6, 7 and 8!! I wish I could re-vote to express that, but since I can't, I figured I'd let you know :) looking forward to your next update!!
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IndiDoughnuts

Hey you guys! I'm having some trouble with something and wanted to ask my readers: Past tense OR Present tense? I have jumed between both in Neon Magic and want to know which one you all prefer! Please let me know and I'll fix it to that because I cannot decide on my own lmfao!

StephRose1201

@IndiDoughnuts I've used both - present for Home, past for Ghost Portal - and honestly, it's all about the feeling. I felt like Home needed to be in present tense because I was also writing in 1st person, and I personally like that combination. Some of my other stuff is in 3rd person past tense, however. That's how I prefer it, because it rings better when I read my chapters out loud. For your story, it's really up to you - try both and read them out loud, and see which one sounds best! That would be my advice. :)
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IndiDoughnuts

Y'ALL, 
          
          HOLY MOLLY
          
          I WOKE UP TODAY
          
          TO
          
          1000!!!! 
          
          AHHH, THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!!

StephRose1201

@IndiDoughnuts <3 congrats!!!!
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IndiDoughnuts

@WritingForToday aww, Mel, you are too sweet!!! I seriously couldn't have gotten 1k without you tho  And your story will be there soon! And you'll be there soon!! Just remember that fanatsy has a larger audience so its easier to get reads in it then sci-fi books. YOU WILL BE NEXT THO!
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WritingForToday

@IndiDoughnuts I really wanted to be the person to tell you! Like I kept checking yesterday but the one day I don't check you've beaten me to it
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IndiDoughnuts

Hello all my fantastic and amazing readers <3 I have some bad news to share with you all... I will not be updating this week BUT it is for good reason!I am going to spend this week fine tuning the plot and character dynamics as well as the rules of the magical world in Neon Magic. The story will be updated with fixed chapters and some will be completely scratched and replaced with something else. I will post a key explaining where you can find the fixes so no worry about having to backtrack and reread EVERYTHING because I will tell what is fixed and changed! As always, feel free to PM me with any questions and suggestions you all have- If you'd like to see something in the story, tell me and might be able to include it!
          
          SO I apologize for all the updates you will be getting lol. But it will be worth it hopefully! Thanks for the understanding y'all <3

StephRose1201

@IndiDoughnuts yay! And I love the new cover by the way!!
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