InfinityXanadu

Lol. People don't like me very much, it seems. I guess that's because I'm always sharing my opinon. Anyone have similar experiences?
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InfinityXanadu

@ShadowDragon1004 
          I don't understand why you think this is bullying. I'm simply making an educated, somewhat-respectful response to your works, in the hope that you'll read, comprehend, and use my comments to improve your writing.
          
          As I understand them, the grounds for reporting do not, and I repeat DO NOT include simply commenting in order to help an author attain a metaphysical state of literary enlightenment.
          
          Could someone please point out to me how I've been "bullying" or violating any of those rules? No? I didn't think so.
          
          Look. It's not that I don't like your stories. It's not that I think they're bad because you wrote them. It isn't even (perish the thought) that I WANT to write reviews like this.
          
          It is merely for the fact that I want to help you improve your writing. I hope that you can understand that, at least.
          
          So no, I must refuse your request with all due respect. And by that, I mean the respect which you are due. That amount of respect will be determined by YOUR niceties towards ME, which will in turn be determined by a number of esoteric chemical reactions, psychosomatic constructs, and societal dictations. I pray that you do not succumb to mere anger, for that won't fulfil anything.
          
          And with that, I'll bid thee good day.
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PurpleDragon_MC

@InfinityXanadu  why can't you just leave me alone I get bullied where I live so I don't need any here if you don't like my stories then you don't have to read them but other people do enjoy them so I don't really want you to comment on my page or any of my books anymore so please leave me alone and if you post anymore comments on either my page or any of my books then I will report you 
          -ShaodwDragon1004

InfinityXanadu

Okay. BEFORE YOU DELETE THIS, PLEASE READ THE CAPITALIZED TEXT. THIS IS NOT MEANT AS A VALUE JUDGEMENT, NOR IN ANY RUDE WAY. DO NOT MINDLESSLY CENSOR EDUCATED, RESPECTFUL COMMENTS. Thank you.
          
          Now, I have one GLARING question for you. How is this a story?
          I mean this seriously. All it is is a character description. While you may write more later, I suggest doing so in the UTMOST haste.
          
          Conversely, if you DON'T intend on writing ACTUAL literature, I have a couple of good fanfictions for you to read. They have a plot; they develop characters IN the story rather than through a fact-sheet; and they don't just make the OC OP, automatically friends with Woona, et al.
          
          Now, there's NOTHING wrong with writing character overviews and plot synopses, but just don't PUBLISH them. They're not a STORY. Oh, and the padding. It is... AS FREAKING LONG AS THE ENTIRE "STORY" ITSELF... That is just shameful...
          
          Now, on to your story itself *shudders*.
          The title needs an apostrophe. It should be "Purple Swirl*apostrophe*s Life" (Purple Swirl's Life).
          
          The protagonist doesn't seem too bad at first glance; no gratuitous OCxRD, but it quickly goes downhill from there. "Main Six" should be "Mane Six," you don't use the Oxford comma in your Cutie Mark description, and "Unicorn" should be capitalized. Spelling and grammar errors aside, this OC is pretty well crafted. That is, however, probably the only compliment you'll get from me about this.
          
          Please don't make the OC instant friends with Luna; that just doesn't work. It also shows that you don't have much *ahem* experience with writing *ahem* good-quality *ahem* fanfiction (God, I'm starting to sound like Umbridge)(Meant in the best possible way, of course).
          
          Also, what is the "forrbidden area" (sp:Forbidden)? And how did she suddenly run away to Canterlot, become insta-friends w/ Mane 6, etc. You kinda have to give us these DETAILS. Details make good writing.
          
          I'm suggesting you read:
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/38830/Race-the-Wind...

InfinityXanadu

@InfinityXanadu 
          Some more fanfictions I'm suggesting you read (Edited for brevity, of course):
          (Race The Wind is SoarFire ship)
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53529/A-Shining-Paradox (Shining Armor comedy fic)
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54117/Whom-the-Princesses-Would-Destroy... (Best. Freaking. Comedy I've ever discovered)
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/8023/Machinations-of-a-Trickster (REALLY good fic by anyone's standards)
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/31962/Everything-Went-Numb (A deep, thoughful sadfic)
          http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48803/My-Little-Behemoth%3A-Friendship-is-more-than-Food (Another nice little sadfic)
          
          These ^^ are meant as some basic examples of good writing across the fiction spectrum: Sad/Dark, Tragic, Comedy, Random, etc.
          
          Of course, no comment like this would be complete without the self-advertisement that plagues Wattpad like Yersinia Pestis...
          
          You can read MY humble attempt at a Dark/Sad TwiDash either on Wattpad at http://www.wattpad.com/story/2467636-colorless-fade-to-grey-mlp-fanfiction-not-ocxrd
          
          Or on FIMFiction.net (which I would suggest anyone looking for GOOD MLP fics to join) at http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56499/Colorless
          
          Heck, if you wanted a crossover fic example, I've got one for you:
          http://infinityxanadu.deviantart.com/#/d5jodjc (Fire Emblem/MLP crossover, Minor platonic Ike x Soren).
          
          I would HEARTILY suggest reading these, and more, fanfictions before attempting work on any. It is ABSOLUTELY essential that you have a good background in OTHER kinds of literature, too. William Shakespeare, Ernest Hemingway, Maya Angelou; all those good folks can help with the story-writing process. And, if you ever want some help, just ask yours truly. I. Will. Help. You if you want it. And, just a final note.
          
          THESE COMMENTS ARE NOT MEANT AS AN INSULT. NOR ARE THEY MEANT TO IN ANY WAY DEGRADE YOUR WORK PAST WHAT I HAVE EXPLICITLY NOTED. I WOULD VERY MUCH APPRECIATE IT IF YOU DON'T CENSOR ME. Thank you,
          
          InfinityXanadu {IX}