Someone somewhere

Hey for just a bet I have some ideas that would really help and I have edited it a bit (I will not post it anywhere) and I would like to see if you are interested in reading it.

Read my new novel Wreath 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374423095?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Santiyao5689

What's the trailer for "Just a bet"

so. im going to be here for constructive criticism okay? 
          
          
          "The bet" is bad.
          there is no ponctuation and its one entire sentence in each chapter. 
          
          so suggestion:
          edit it

GET ON
          GET ON
          GET ON
          GET ON
          GET ON
          GET ON
          RN OR ELSE

hey, my names Natalie, i love all your storys, my first story i read in this app was one of yours and then i started reading other ones but you gave me a great impretion of wattad and im thankful of that.
          
          keep writing.......

Deleting Bad Boy Love 1 and 2 today!!! 

wait ?? why ? did you delete your stories ? they are great stories ! I am very confused ? 

I'm deleting bad boy 1 and 2 on December 29,2015

Grace heyyyyy it's Shanay!!!