Init649

Hey ! Please share this with your friends and family. If this turns out to be a good or atleast decent book ,I think I'll draft it and publish it.But this will be the start of everything. So please share it with others.
          Also tell me how you really feel about it ,and how you think I can improve.
          THANKS
          INIT

Hello! I'm pretty new to all of this. It is quite hard when it comes to writing something someone will love.This is my first ever attempt on a book,so please do read it and tell me what you really feel about it. Critiques and all. I've thought about taking it down and writing it all together ,because that way it'll be easier to get a good flow to the story.But I need people's opinions to improve it. I had already posted a ccouple of chapters ,but I redid them . So please go check it out and tell me how you feel about it..Thanx.It means a lot.
          Init (Its not my real name)

hello beautiful person 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          have an amazing day 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          why?? 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          cause you deserve it 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          don't let anyone make you think less of yourself 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          you are perfect