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WAMred

https://www.wattpad.com/story/403709278?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=WAMred

Inkling62

@WAMred hey I did a Quick Look at your ocs for the stories and while I like them I do have a few minor notes
            I feel like Scorpyntra name should be changed as its name feels more like a reference to scorpions whereas it’s appearance is bat like and powers can’t really metaphorically be connected to scorpions maybe just change the name to be more fitting
            
            No hate to the other generals I love all the ocs and the reference to wild force with one of them, but I think it would be an interesting idea to have maybe a Beetle, Raven, Spider, and Scorpion monsters as part of the main group, in reference to the animals parts that make up Aku, like a reverse ranger force or something I don’t know maybe I’m overthinking making connections and metaphors but I think it would be a cool idea
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WAMred

Hey it been a while and I want your opinion on these two books I made when you get a chance:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403632937?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=WAMred

Inkling62

@WAMred hey I did a read and left my opinion in a comment on the bottom
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