Inkling62

Happy Thanksgiving Everyone!
          	
          	Enjoy time with family and gorging on delicious turkeys and other assortments of food

WAMred

Inkling62

@WAMred hey I did a Quick Look at your ocs for the stories and while I like them I do have a few minor notes
            I feel like Scorpyntra name should be changed as its name feels more like a reference to scorpions whereas it’s appearance is bat like and powers can’t really metaphorically be connected to scorpions maybe just change the name to be more fitting
            
            No hate to the other generals I love all the ocs and the reference to wild force with one of them, but I think it would be an interesting idea to have maybe a Beetle, Raven, Spider, and Scorpion monsters as part of the main group, in reference to the animals parts that make up Aku, like a reverse ranger force or something I don’t know maybe I’m overthinking making connections and metaphors but I think it would be a cool idea
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WAMred

@Inkling62 actually blame ChatGPT as I did put scorpion tail and bat wings so it might had come to that name because of my scorpion description 
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WAMred

Hey it been a while and I want your opinion on these two books I made when you get a chance:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403632937?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=WAMred

Inkling62

@WAMred hey I did a read and left my opinion in a comment on the bottom
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WAMred

@Inkling62 just saw and responded 
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WAMred

Hey it been a while

Inkling62

@WAMred Though I have definitely been thinking about it and may try to make a return at some point
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Inkling62

@WAMred Hello to you too
            Indeed it has
            I’m still around though reading things
            But I’m now in college and I looking back at how I originally did starting out, I want to take some time to think and maybe rehash some of my old works and and just generally refresh, I’m still around but in terms of writing, I’m not sure when I’ll be back
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