Innocence51

Flowing Promises Chapters from 1 to 40 has been revised.

kakarot220

Do you have any advice in terms of revision? I wrote a Nagikae light novel (I wrote it because I was inspired by Flowering Promises) and it’s 41 chapters + prologue and epilogue, and I want to change certain aspects in terms of adding dialogue or extension of chapters. I’m not sure if that’s how I should be doing my edits. 
          
          If you want to manually check things out, it’s my only story called “What The Future Holds For Us”
          
          Thanks!

kakarot220

@Innocence51 thanks for the advice! The Microsoft Word thing is a great idea! The changing of small details sounds like a smart thing to do as well.
            
            I’ll update things soon, and when I’ve made some corrections feel free to look at it again if you wish. Thanks again!
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Innocence51

Hi, thank you for reaching out. As for my advice, by revising your story means that you're correcting it. What I do is I copy/paste my chapters to Microsoft Word and see if there are any typos or grammar errors. If much possible, I also add or remove certain contents that I find off-putting. Since I started writing my fanfiction when I was still in junior high school (completed the story on my university), I had to change most of the parts.
            
            I've read a partial of your story and yes there seems to be several typos and grammatical errors. If you're planning to add more dialogues and chapters, feel free to do so. It is your story, so it's up to you on how should it look like after being revised. But, just don't change the plot. It would be weird if you happened to do so.
            
            Though I say all this, I haven't even finished revising my fanfiction (rip me T_T) Am kinda pretty busy with my online classes and assignments, and most of the time, I just play video games.
            
            But welp, I guess that's all for my advice. Thanks for giving my story a credit. Knowing someone getting some inspiration from my work is an appreciation.
            
            Have a good day!
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Innocence51

To all Flowing Promises readers! The update is nothing major. I just decided to put up a warning at the very beginning of the book that the book is still undergoing revisions. Nothing to see here! :P

TonoTakaki360

@Innocence51 Hm.
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Innocence51

@TonoTakaki360 Glad to hear that
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TonoTakaki360

@Innocence51 sorry if I didn't responded to you right away.
            
            And no don't worry. It is now showing again.
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Innocence51

So uh, I want to change my email in this wattpad acc since its so old and I kinda forgot the password for it (for logging in purposes; currently using FB to log in). But in order for me to do that, I have to put in my wattpad password. Problem is, I don't know what that password is. And if I choose "Forgot Password", I have to use my email (which I also don't know the password and I can't seem to recover it.) Help :v

Innocence51

um, sorry guys. I couldn't hit my quota. remember I was supposed to finish the revision last july 31? yeah. I didn't. I'm so lazy that I spent most of my time playing an rpg xD now hope is lost. (not really) I'll finish the revision this month ABSOLUTELY (yes absolutely) before my university starts again xD really sorry guys and have a good day (because it's still pandemic so watch yourselves ;D)

Innocence51

Flowing Promises Revision Report:
          
          I'm really a lazy writer (lol). Right now, I'm still at Chapter 29.2 (smh). Though, I'm planning to finish the revising this month, so I just hope that I can. And by the way, I placed up a photo for Chapter 29.1. You guys can check it. As for those who haven't gotten there yet (new readers), well just do your best to get there.
          
          Is all ;)

RobGotStolen

Follow 4 Follow? Also I love your story Flowing Promises will you be making more NagiKae fanfics?

RobGotStolen

Thanks, your the best
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Innocence51

Sure. I'm currently revising my Flowing Promises. After that's done, maybe I'll consider making other more.
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Innocence51

Flowing Promises Revision Report:
          
          So far, I'm still at Chapter 10 (smh)... I did say I didn't had anything else to do, but apparently, I do (lol). At this pace, it might take another month or maybe two months to finish the revising. Hopefully.

HBomb12690

@Innocence51 when ur done bung it of to yusei matsui
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