Immersive

hi, if you have time please read my epistolary. votes and comments are highly appreciated. u can follow my writing acc @cancerstears for more updates. thank you and god bless <3
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/242400756-better-off

If you want something mature when it comes to life, decision making and love between passion and someone. This might suits for your taste. However I am new in making stories and this isn't done yet. I hope you could read this and tell me what I should do next to make my story convincing. Thank You! 
          
          
          I open for suggestions don't worry guys!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/234296351