Jaspira

I loved how you wrote your profile. Hope you complete your med studies successfully and thanks so much for adding only you to your reading list for amazing books!

Jaspira

@haqueyashna thanks so much for your kind words it made my day and I’m glad the story made you feel good!
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InoriRain

@Jaspira Thank you. It is sooooooo sweet of you to read my profile. I certainly didn't think someone would actually read lol. Most importantly, I loved your book so couldn't help myself but add it.  I'd rather thank you for writing such a nice story that gives me butterflies in the stomach <3
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infernero6662

Yo Sup? What about our collab? And also I chose to message you here as I do not want to go through particular hassles on Facebook so. Hit me up when you're on wattpad.

InoriRain

@infernero6662  imma here bis x'D lol.let's start writing then?  You write chapter 1. Decide with hijiki rin. And I'll do the summary :3
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Jaspira

Thank you so much for adding my book only you to your amazing readers list

InoriRain

@Jaspira :D then I hope that smiling like this you will keep writing many more amazing stories :') 
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Jaspira

Smiling right now
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misha_m019

Hey thanks for following me. I hope you read my stuff and provide feedback. And i saw your Bio. You are a fellow anime lover now! whats your favorite?

misha_m019

@InoriRain Only if you want to and you're welcome :)
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InoriRain

@themoonlight1234  lol. Haven't watched any for a while, so my addictions gone for now x'DDDD 
            
            I'd surely watch it! thanks for recommending.
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misha_m019

You should watch Noragami and Durarara are great too! i watch too much anime lol. I'm addicted.
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VladaMatveeva

Dood :)

InoriRain

@VladaMatveeva   You thu!! *snif snif* :D
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VladaMatveeva

You ma best buud! T_T
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Kaelan_Bleacher

Thanks for following me. That means a lot to me ;) Now also have the time to give you a more detailed feedback. The things I noticed don't influence the reading itself but are more concernd with punctuation. You should take a look again at the  comma use in direct speech as well as coordinating conjunctions. Please don't think I wanna critcize you as it is still readable, but those are the small things that can improve your writing. By the way, I also made those mistakes and spent a whole day researching on English punctutation. It was pure fun ;P I probably still make a lot of these mistakes.

InoriRain

@Kaelan_Bleacher I'm near the end of chapter 2. I think it'll be completed before Friday as there's not much left to write. Thanks for your support!  :D I'm gonna try my best! :')
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Kaelan_Bleacher

@InoriRain Take your time and don't rush yourself. It's better if you write it the best you could than trying to get it published as soon as possible.
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InoriRain

@Kaelan_Bleacher I'm doing my best to write without errors.  You were a really big help. :D Hopefully I'll be able to publish chapter 2 this Friday!  :')
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