Hey. I love your story so much that I’ve reread it more than 10 times. But there’s something that has been bothering me for a while and please not take any offense to it. It’s just that I think you have mixed Tank with Tusk in a few if not most of your chapters. Don’t get me wrong, I understand which character you meant when you described the bear but I found it quite funny and a little cute picturing a mini orc Tusk in his arms. Just wanted to let you know about. I don’t really care if you change it. I was only bothered by picturing the mini orc instead of the bear.
