Michael

Your story disconnected is good, I like the concept. Could you check out my story too and tell me what you think 

Okay, i know ive got five but the fifth is also written in Japanese so it takes longer and i literally just started , Plan to turn that into an anime, Abstracted clarity is my main project of the 4 to be animated series' im creating, so yeah this is a creative mind finding /early audience gathering thing, so any and all feedback is accepted  , spread even if you might not like it someone else might and yeah, lets grow together, it isn't a competition after all, and thats about it